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A real shoot. my first.
Old 04-18-2005, 12:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Okay let me have it.
If you go to the portfolio you'll see what the shoot was for (not done editing yet)
I have more to go through But I want some honest opinions on what I have up so far.
The model is Natasha from Nashville. #38761 (you know where)
She did her own makeup.
Lighting was borrowed hot lights with two softboxes
Maybe this pic will show up...i seem to have a problem with that....

[image]http//:http://www.hcnewspaper.com/v-web/gal.../Tasha_016_JFR[/image]

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Re: A real shoot. my first.
Old 04-18-2005, 03:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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In response to your request;

First I like the concepts. The WhiteBalance seems to be off some and the levels and contrast are low. I think you lit them well they just need to be tweeked, The back view with the loose holster straps is distracting. The one with two pistols - she is not looking at what she is aiming at or at you so it is off to me. You also need more light under the cap, her eyes get lost.

Looks like a fun shoot and I like the styling, just work color balance and levels, and a slight kick to contrast and you'll be fine.

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Re: A real shoot. my first.
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Hi, Overall good work. The lighting seems a little dark, but that may be my moniter. Kewl Concept. Beautiful Model. I went to your portfolio to view them. You picture didn't come through.
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Re: A real shoot. my first.
Old 04-18-2005, 03:34 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I can't seem to get the hang of putting images in my posts.
All of the shots were about 1.5 stops underexposed, fortunately I still have the raw files I just haven't had time to adjust them yet.
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