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Old 04-17-2005, 07:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi all,

HERE is my first post in GG. Can it be a fashion or close to commercial? I took this without much planning/preparations. No lighting aids.

Thanks for comments in advance!
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Old 04-17-2005, 10:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The hand looks like it's reaching in from the side, like somebody else hand. I find that distracting. I like the location on stairs with the red wall behind it and think you should do some planning to shoot there. Sometime during the day when the sun isn't so hot right there.

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Old 04-18-2005, 12:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Sorry Getting the noun forgiving Red X
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Old 04-18-2005, 02:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Does THIS work?
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Old 04-18-2005, 02:42 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Sorry No same same [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]
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Image Viewing problems?
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Is there anybody else who cannot view the picture? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
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What the group, I think, is objecting to is the fingers jutting out to make contact with the neck. Move the hand closer to the neck so that the model is holding the neck or resting on the hand. Posing should look naturual. Not hyper extended or over done. My two cents.

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Thanks for advise!

Will take some more pictures at this location and post them later on. The location is not crowded in weekends [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] So, I prefer going there in weekends.
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