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Old 04-16-2005, 08:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I would like some input on the attached study from the great photographers on this site.

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Old 04-16-2005, 08:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Beautiful Image....I think it would make an even better Black and White.
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I like the shot. I like the pose and feel. What is distracting to me is her skin. IMHO it needs to be PS's so it appears more even. I can see shaved hairs on her leg, and some unevenness in the skin on her arm. Other than that, a very sweet image.

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I like the shot. A few things that I would try different next time is to make it "softer"....meaning not pressing the cheek against her knee so hard...no pulling her legs into herself so tightly etc.

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Old 04-16-2005, 10:12 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I'm thinking a little softening of the skin, and the shadow areas seem to have a green tint to them (my monitor?)..
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I would like to see it little bit smoother. Great image though!
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Beautiful shot. I would recommend that you change nothing at all, except maybe try it as a B&W. Nicely done.
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Old 04-16-2005, 12:18 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Doug,

Something like this?

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Definately better in b&w. Smoothing, softening, naah. Keep up the good work.

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Old 04-17-2005, 09:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Love it in b&w!!
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