You're getting there Don, you're getting there. Some of your best yet.
It's real tough to eliminate unwanted shadows in a high key image but your shadows have added depth to an otherwise "floating" model. The next time DeAnn tries this pose have her rotate her right hip ever so slightly toward the left for a more appealing "s" curve.
Also reverse the position of her hair so that the majority if it fills the white space between the hand closest to the camera and he shoulder. The remaining hair on her left will help the image flow toward the rest of her body.
You have chosen a very difficult pose that the eye and the brain wants to flip upright but your hard work has paid off in a very appealing image. Good work to the both of you.