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Becky (New Model)
Old 04-10-2005, 02:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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We were doing this...


When a man in a car came by and said he had a bike shop up the hill and asked us if we wanted to shoot on the bikes in his shop.
Becky was game and so was I.
We ended up doing this...


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Re: Becky (New Model)
Old 04-10-2005, 05:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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there are a few dead giveaways in your composite...

spaces in between the wheel spokes...the windscreen is too light to be in front of a black background, and the overall selection is a bit loose.





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I'd like to see more like the first one. maybe with the bike as a prop.
The second one just feels over done for me. Was there something in the shot you had to get rid of?
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Re: Becky (New Model)
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Yeah...The whole store. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img] It was actually shot in the store. I had no lighting, just my camera.
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Kewl Photo!!! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]
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I think this top one is one the best you've ever done!!! Love it!!

I like the second one also and think you did a great job on the PS for you're first really big try.

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Thanks Cin,

I have to give a lot of the credit to the model Becky. She was just a joy to work with. She was up for anything, she was 15 minutes early and she was pleasant the whole time. It was great. Plus we dealt with the unexpected together. (The Bike Thing) [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
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I like #1
For #2 the model seems to get lost in the background. I see the bike first and the girl on it second.
background too dark? crop in tighter?
I am also in the beginning learning stages.
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