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Old 04-08-2005, 05:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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2more critique away!!!!!! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 04-09-2005, 05:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Black Skirt with the black background makes it look like a magic trick....Part of her floats.

The tank top is kind of loud and busy. I am not a fan of patterns in simple model photography.

Arms crossed like this is a man's pose. If you are going to do the traditional arms crossed pose, then have her place her hands so we can see them in a bent wrist, fingers elegantly placed up the arm....

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Old 04-09-2005, 07:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for takin the time JT Ru Tslking kinda like this or this? or no



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Re: Black on Black
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In the first one the pink works against the black. Another hint is to take a clothes pin and pin back the lose shirt in the back.

The second the shirt is a solid color and that is more suttle to the eye so it's not distracting with a pattern.

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Actually No i don't ..Sorry
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