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Old 04-05-2005, 10:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First pic post here, still trying to learn how to do this stuff.

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Re: My attempt
Old 04-05-2005, 11:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Cool shot, Bobby.. looks like you've gotten a bit of learnin' down, already!

From my viewpoint, you've got a couple of things that detract from the overall effect.... her pretty face is hidden a bit too much by the hair at her cheeks and down to her chin. Plus, the backlight is a tad too hot for my taste... blows out her hair, but more importantly her right arm goes detail free as well. Her pose is good, but could be stronger if she had dropped her left shoulder a bit and leaned into the frame a bit more.

All in all, though, a very pretty image!

Here's one more to my taste for the backlight... Ashley Diane
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Re: My attempt
Old 04-06-2005, 10:25 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the input Wayne. I have to agree about the hairlight being to hot, it was one of those hey let me try something type of things. I'll try and work on the things you've touched on. Again thanks for your help and great pic you have there by the way
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Re: My attempt
Old 04-06-2005, 11:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Welcome to GG. I like it. I would like to see more of the models face though.
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Old 04-07-2005, 09:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hi Wayne,

I just wanted to say that I really love this image you posted! The light just seems to wrap around her and embrace her. It's so very appealing! The lighting looks pretty straight forward but just to satisfy my curiousity, how did you light her? Did you use a large soft box or a light panel?

Thanks for sharing! Beautiful shot!

Good day!

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Old 04-08-2005, 08:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hey, Mike! Thanks for the kudos.

The front light was from a large softbox to the camera right.

OK, ya talked me into it... here's another with the same setup.

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