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Old 04-05-2005, 06:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These pics are from my last shoot...it took place at the Rosecrucian Egyptian Museum in San Jose, CA.
Please help by critiquing the photos so I can get back to my photographer and improve next time!
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Old 04-05-2005, 07:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The only comment I would make about the modelling in my very humblest of opinions is to relax your shoulders more in the third one and hand placement seems a little awkward in the first.

Thanks for posting, please post more.
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Old 04-05-2005, 08:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with David. Also, I think the first shot could use a crop at the top and your jacket looks a little bunched on your right. The right hand fingers are gapped while the left are together. I like the fingers together better. If that's a dumpster in the doorway perhaps a new angle would be better. The second image needs the top and left cropped and the third should be tighter. These are issues that are more related to the photography aspect of the photos. I think the black jacket doesn't really do you justice. You really have beautiful features.
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Old 04-05-2005, 08:41 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey Christine, I think you are doing fantastic!!! The one basic thing I notice is that you are very stiff, relax, feel the femine S curve of your body (ok, get your mind out of the gutter guys [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]), and last but not least, practice, practice, practice.

Do it in the mirror, watch your movement and body form. The more you do it, the better and more comfortable you will become. And don't take alot of time of from practice or you'll get old and stiff like me [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Looking forward to seeing more
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