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First attempt on model picture
Old 04-05-2005, 03:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi there
this is my first time taking this kind of pictures, please all the critiques are accepted (good or bad) also any idea to improve it. thanks to my wife to be my personal model for this adventure.

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Old 04-05-2005, 03:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks good for a start, but next time try having her open her mouth just enough to breath through. I really like the dramatic lighting.

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Re: First attempt on model picture
Old 04-05-2005, 04:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I would convert to B & W. Also the string of hair on her right is a little distracting. A very beautiful young lady. Her eyes are a little too extreme. Have her look away but not quite as high and a little more to her right. In most cases you want to try to get the whites of the eye even on both sides of pupil. Having said that there will be times that this may not be wanted.

Here's an examble of eyes. Not a very good image but wanted to show what I meant by the eyes.

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Very nice
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The dramtic lighting is very good and I would keep it very dark, but maybe try a reflector board and bring up the light on the dark side just a little. It may not be better, but maybe ...

And the hair style, skin tone, and fabric of the shirt are perfect. But then the unnatural lip color is not good. Maybe a more natural color or often lip gloss only to give a wet look would make this better.

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Old 04-05-2005, 04:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I would have added a reflector to lighten up the hard shadow a bit.

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Old 04-05-2005, 04:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks to all of you i will apply the ideas next time
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Old 04-05-2005, 06:24 PM   #7 (permalink)
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wish my shots looked more like this!!
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the lighting's dramatic, the model's pretty, but it's difficult to focus on those things when she's wearing that attention grabbing white halter top encasing such a well-endowed (also attention grabbing) chest and wearing pretty much the worst color of lipstick she could think to put on.

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