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BRAND NEW-Let me have it.
Old 04-03-2005, 04:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm both new here and new to this style of photography, any help is appreciated.

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Re: BRAND NEW-Let me have it.
Old 04-03-2005, 04:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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well, the most I can say on this image is that you have good lighting on her skin, but the background IMO is too dark of a color. I would also preferr to see her face, even if you were going for a sad or depressed look.

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Re: BRAND NEW-Let me have it.
Old 04-03-2005, 06:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Welcome to GG! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] I like the lighting on the model but the background doesn't look right. I would also like to see her facing the camera. Keep posting. Looking forward to more from you. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Re: BRAND NEW-Let me have it.
Old 04-04-2005, 07:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I am guessing the focal point of the shot is her breasts? That is the only thing in the shot that catches the eye. The skin tones look ok but there is not really much else in this shot that works for me. Reminds me of a snapshot that you took when she wasnt paying attention. Get some light on the background, get her head up and looking at the camera and put a little thought into the shot. Let us see what else you can do.

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Re: BRAND NEW-Let me have it.
Old 04-04-2005, 12:49 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Next time have her stand further away from the background. Usually at least 3 ft away. That would help to blur the background and make her more the focus.

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Usually good advice...
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I think that standing at least 3 feet away is usually good advice. Personally I like 30 or more [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img] so that I can really isolate the subject with depth of field. Maybe I use hyperbole too often...

However, I think this is a special case where the painted wall gives great hightlights and atmosphere to the photo. The orientation is what bothers me here, as I think this should have been a vertical compostition.

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