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Two artistic nudes from last night.
Old 04-03-2005, 02:20 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I shot these last night in my "garage"... Really ! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] I'm still trying to learn and collect equipment, but I'm having fun in the meantime! This is my favorite model (and better half) Zelda Beth. A patient women that I am thankful who supports all of my interests. Comments and suggestions on the images welcome.

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Re: Two artistic nudes from last night.
Old 04-03-2005, 06:05 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think the first one needs some softening at her hips. I like the second photo much better. I like the lighting and shadows. JMO [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Dont like the first one at all... Second one looks much better to me. Lighting and shadows are good, but remember to use the shadows to your advantage. with the way the light hits her left side it is accentuating her stomach a bit. A bit more shadow on that side may have helped a bit. Nice shot anyway, and it is great that you have a willing model and supporter.

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Thanks for the comments Scott. I guess it's good that this kind of art is subjective. Although I like both images, the first one is definitely my favorite.

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Old 04-04-2005, 10:28 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks Zairia! Beth said the same thing about the hips. Guess I'll have to work on it some more [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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