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Jamie in a Blue Scarf
Old 04-01-2005, 07:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here are some new ones shot this week. What do you think?



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Re: Jamie in a Blue Scarf
Old 04-02-2005, 11:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Beautiful model!
There is no seperation between her and the background. Try setting up a hair light to get that seperation. Pose #1 is not flattering to her legs. The folds in the scarf are distracting too. Make sure to iron it next time. Keep shooting. Best Regards, Darrell
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Re: Jamie in a Blue Scarf
Old 04-02-2005, 02:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Should have ironed the scarf..otherwise I like them
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Re: Jamie in a Blue Scarf
Old 04-03-2005, 01:25 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Both photos have visible artifacts and especially the second one. You have set to much JPEG compression on both, but way too much on number 2. A shot with this visible size should be at least 50-75K and you are coming in at less than 17K. If using photoshop I suggest a quality setting of 80, but no lower than 60.



The photo above is a photo of Liz at quality 80. The below is at quality 30. You can see the difference, especially looking at the bubbles in the upper right.



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Re: Jamie in a Blue Scarf
Old 04-03-2005, 01:58 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I never noticed the wrinkels in the scarf. Not sure how they are so obvious. Anyway I smothed out her thies and gave the scarf a photoshop ironing. What do you think now?

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Thanks, I'll double check the compression.
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Much cleaner now.
I liked it before, but this really helps.
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