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Old 03-29-2005, 11:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This was taken during my first experience working with a model at the San Diego Smackdown. Comments and critiques are welcomed...I think I'm ready [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img] Natalie
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Old 03-29-2005, 11:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks really good, but a reflector or fill flash would lighten the shadow under her chin. The green jersey makes her disappear into the tree, which could be a nice effect, but I think white or silver would have been a better color. Overall, very good.
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Old 03-30-2005, 12:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Everybody always finds something different [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] I don't find the green jersey getting lost in the trees because of the background blur. That keeps is nicely separated for me. The shadow under the chin doesn't bother me either. A little bit of fill would be nice, but I would expect to see a shadow there, and having it missing would be odd. What I find as a nit pick would be that her left hand is cropped off. A touch of blue at the edge of the frame would be nice in my opinion, and lacking it seems off.

But, overall, I like the image.
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