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Couple of shots from today\'s shoot
Old 03-26-2005, 07:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey Critique away images. Model is Paula and she did the makeup and hair [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Constructive please . Thank You in advance
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Here's my input on your photos to try to help make them a little better. The lighting looks a little on the flat side and the skin tones seem off to me. On the first picture I would rather see her face by having her pull the flower away from her nose a few inches. Perhaps a tighter crop so that there is less empty black space above her head. On the second photo it looks as though it was shot with the camera flash creating the catch light in the middle of her eyes and a shadow to the right side on the red backdrop. Try shooting this with another light source and move her away from the backdrop a few feet. Her pose looks a little stiff also. But here is another version with your copyright logo on the picture and a few adjustments. Keep shooting and post more when you get them.


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Jim,

Thanks for the critique the images where raw but I thought the same things you did and you where right about the flash set up. I'm working with her this weekend again and I still have about 1100 images to go through. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
Again Thanks for the input. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

I'll post more to be sure. Like this once from the same shoote.Another one for you to critique [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Hair/Make up/and wardrobe by model.


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She's an attractive woman to have model for you and it appears that with about 1100 other images to go through and more on the way, you will be busy looking at and editing pictures for a while. Not a bad way to spend your time. A little photoshop and this one will look a little better too. There are certain times where a camera flash is the only available light to work with. If you get the chance, there are some inexpensive hot lights from Lowes and Home Depot that can be used as photo lighting. 500 watt halogen work lights.
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Thanks for the help. I'll check HDtomorrow since there's one 3blocks away
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