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A couple from this evening\'s shoot
Old 03-23-2005, 11:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Dave Blecman's Posneg workshop (posneg.com) really paid off. These two were barely touched in photoshop. Crop and slight levels adjustment. Model is Olivia, she wanted pics for a Acting compcard, and we did some smiley headshots as well, but I like these two. Thoughts?



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Re: A couple from this evening\'s shoot
Old 03-24-2005, 11:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the pose and the way the light from behind works. But I don't like the way it makes her nose look.

There is no shadow to the side and it just disappears. My mind keeps trying to find her nose between the tip and her eyes but it can't and decides her nose is really wide.

Could be my monitor or just my cooky eyes.
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Nice model, good exposure.

As much light as you have, I would have gone for a little more depth of field so that the eyes are sharp as a tack. In #1, I would have backed off on the back light and not used her arms to frame her face...it would be a nice head shot on it's own.

I like the tight crops and crisp colors. Show the forum a few others please.

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Re: A couple from this evening\'s shoot
Old 03-24-2005, 09:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i vote for #1. i'm a big fan of hot backlighting. i think it could use the slightest bit of sharpening.
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Re: A couple from this evening\'s shoot
Old 03-25-2005, 08:18 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks Jimmy! Here's another one for y'all.

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Thanks Jim. I'm starting the think that Digital Rebels just might not be all that great at focusing, either that or Canon's 35-135mm USM lenses are soft, because I set my focus point on her eye for each shot and was shotting around F11.3. I attached another image from the shoot to JimmyD's reply. Thanks again!
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Nope, I intentionally made her nose disappear. No one likes their own nose (not that her's was bad).
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Very nice...I like this one better. -Jim
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