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Old 03-22-2005, 09:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I had this concept in mind for almost a year before an oppourtunity presented itself to make it a reality. Thoughts anyone?

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Old 03-22-2005, 11:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Kind of reminds me of an ad for a Bob Fosse stage show or movie.

Now here's where I think it needs a bit of refinement.

I think you might play with positioning the light somewhat differently to cut down the flare that sort of washes out the silhouette in the shoulder areas. Or pull the image into PhotoShop and fill the lighter silhouette areas with black.

I'd also suggest if possible pulling back so you can get the floor shadow in the frame.

The flooring seams bother me a bit, and I find the arc of reddish light a little distracting. There are what appears to be dust spots or flare artifacts scattered about.

On the plus side, the model nailed the pose. There is a bit of ambiguity as to whether it's a male or female which is interesting.

The image could be pulled into PhotoShop and some of the issues resolved. I really think getting the floor shadow into the frame would have made a strong graphic.

Sorry, I'm in Netscape and can't post an image from my portfolio.
Maybe one of these days they'll fix that...
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Re: Review and critique please
Old 03-23-2005, 09:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Clean it up (artifacts, that l-shaped thingie on the floor, maybe clone out the seam) and it'd be one seriously cool picture. Some levels or contrast work may also be in order, I think, as the light is a little washed out. I would try removing the hair (back of the neck camera right) and see how it looked, but that's not a criticism, it's just an observation of an alternative that I would try. Model is outstanding.

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