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Old 03-22-2005, 01:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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That's the only way that I'll learn.



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Old 03-22-2005, 02:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Darrel,
first I hate you because you have chance to have Victoria as model!! :-)
second I love this picture and I can say just one thing about the shadow on her legs, be carefull when you compose the imagine (anyway if you want the shadow they are welcome).
I think that shadow just on her legs are not so actractive.

Anyway...great shot, also for low shooting angle.

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Old 03-22-2005, 12:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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You need to remember that you have your own style and make images that you like.
If you had 10 photographers in that room you would get 10 different styles.

A mentor friend of mine, who is a retired life-time high school photography teacher, taught me to always crop out anything that does not add to the model(s). He would crop out all the extra wall space in your image. I rarely include feet unless the shoes are special and from this angle and lens they appear out of proportion to me.


Would not work here.



When it works for me but I could have cropped for a vertical image.
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Old 03-22-2005, 03:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Your moveing to a wax look go easy on PS.
And My what big feet she has!
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Old 03-22-2005, 06:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The lines of those vertical blinds would make great leading lines into her if you had used them as the background. My .02.
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Her right arm is missing... Gone, M.I.A., disappeared. I want it back!

Secondly, the taupe colors work well, I think I would have moved to the right to avoid the blinds being behind her.

Now let's be honest. Victoria is gorgeous, curvy, and sexy. Hiding her bosom is a shame. I think there are a number of ways this pose could have been slightly changed to show her off to full advantage. Just repositioning her left arm a bit would have helped a lot. Having her head leaning towards the camera would have made her more engaging. But I don't know what look you were trying for.

The stockings are interesting, but the missing arm spoils the image for me.

As always, just my opinion, and worth what it costs...



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Old 03-23-2005, 01:24 PM   #7 (permalink)
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not bad, I'd like to see a shot with her head tilted to about 11-o'clock instead of the 2-o'clock you have shown...
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I think there's a little too much eye white from look to the side. You could of had her turn her head more towards you, or look straight ahead. But that really nit picking. Good shot!
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Old 03-28-2005, 07:39 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Larry,
The only thing that I have done to this image in PS is adjust levels and curves. There has been no PS applied specifically to the skin.
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you're off to a great start... you are working with one of the most beautiful models on this forum [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] just my 2 cents...
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