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Old 03-18-2005, 09:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys, thanks for the great suggestions, I tried most of them. I still need to invest in a nice background.
Let me know where else I need concentrate.
 
 
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Much Better than the first image. Keep it up! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

This was one of my first images.
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... that is 9,000 times better than the first image you posted. If you continue to improve at this rate you will be the greatest photographer in the world in less than a month. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

I understand why you used the vignette, but I still don't like it, not that you should care one way or another. I especially don't like the really weird truncated-oval shape which makes it way too obvious exactly why you used that shape.

The lighting is not bad for inexperience and limited resources (regarding which I am an expert. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img] ) The pose is a little awkward but not without charm, and the smile is quite nice. The model is a little slender to have her ribs thrust up so prominently, and the lighting is a bit too hot on her breast. I'm fairly sure you Photoshopped her face: you didn't do a bad job of it but it's a little oversmoothed if you did. If you didn't, wow, that's good skin. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

If this is the extent of your posing platform, try curling her up like a cat in various configurations and see if you can't find something you like.

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