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Which one would be best suited for portfolio use?
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As I begin to type this, I think to myself, "Tread lightly, Mike." I don't really think any of them should be added to anybody's portfolio. Not only is there no catalog feel, but not a single image flatters the model, clothing, hair, or makeup or shows the photographer's best work (I hope). It looks like your heart was in the right place, but the desired result just wasn't acheived.
Sinc you're the model, I really don't want to get into the technical aspects of the photographs. As far as what you could have controlled, the flyaways (blowing hair) really hurt the images.
Now that you've been knocked down, go out and try again. I've seen your portfolio and know you can do better.