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Lastnights shoot with my favorite Red Head
Old 03-12-2005, 08:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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For some reason I just love shooting her. Comments? suggestions?
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Re: Lastnights shoot with my favorite Red Head
Old 03-12-2005, 10:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice improvements in this photo. The skins tones are really starting to look good with her, and you have much more depth to this photo than some of the other ones you posted of her. Nice job.
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you're certainly making better use of lighting. i think framing/cropping in this pic doesnt' work: there's too much dead space on the left. i dunno if this is a full-frame image or you cropped, but i think her hair--the left side of her hair--should be almost to the left edge of the image, plus you cropped or framed right at the elbow joint. also, the levels seem wrong: the black level looks right, but i think you need to mess with the gray and white levels to give this image more "punch"

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Old 03-12-2005, 10:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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as per Jimmy's suggestions? am I close here?
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I like this better, good call Jimmyd
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