I like it, although the light falloff on the legs might be a little too much. Of course, I'm not allowed to comment on excess of darkness in anybody else's pictures. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
Just teasing. I see what you were trying to do and if you failed at all, you failed in the proper direction for the look you were trying to achieve - better the legs a little too dark and the light good where you wanted it. I kinda don't like the fact that one of the sheets is a different color - these colors don't go together well in my eye. The posing is good and I like the lines of the legs as parallel curves.