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Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 06:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This one is from this morning's shoot, Comments and Suggestions?
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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 06:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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is that thing she's holding alive? and if so, why do i envy it?
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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 06:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Thank you, now about the image?

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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 07:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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oh... the image. okay.

hmmm... placement of left arm... i dunno about it being hidden like that. would prefer to see it stretched out and in view. the perspective of the shot, with her feet and legs forward, seems kinda off. either her legs and ankles are a little thick with not much definition, or the perspective is causing them to appear that way. i think she would look more elegant if her fingers were outstretched while holding that ewok, or wookie, or whatever it is, rather than clutching it. the lighting's not really all flat, but your levels might be making it seem a little bit that way--black level might be too much in the gray... maybe not tho... could be my laptop monitor. she looks like she has great long hair. maybe you could have worked with that a little more? do you have some pics of her without the use of a prop? she's a very attractive model.
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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 07:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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How can I shoot photos and be blind at the same time. I saw none of your points when I shot it and reviewed it...I see them now. Ok, back to the drawing board. I do have another that I really like (sans rodent). I'll post it now. Thanks Jimmy!
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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 09:22 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Here I go again.

Lower lip? Something is not right there? Hot spot maybe but it just O hell I think about it and get back on it. Jimmy Help.
Her Left shoulder seams awkward to the photo over all. As to the over all shot.
And maybe just maybe a little over dun on the skin in PS. Then again I did just have a cold one!!

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Re: Jennifer from California
Old 03-10-2005, 09:57 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Kind of looks like she needs one heck of a bikini wax!
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Ummm yeah, what were you saying about Kosher poses yesterday? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img] I think we know that she needs that arm to prop herself up, but like they said, it might look better if we could see it in the picture somewhere. The fuzzy cover up is an okay idea, just a different way of showing everything here might help.



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Old 03-10-2005, 11:30 PM   #9 (permalink)
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LOL... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 03-11-2005, 12:24 AM   #10 (permalink)
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i think they call that a "brazilian." the bikini wax, i mean. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]
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