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Old 03-10-2005, 05:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey Everyone!

Can anyone check my website down below and review my pictures and let me know if I am missing anything or if I have any pictures under the wrong category?

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Old 03-10-2005, 07:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey, Amber,

A lot of cool stuff on there, you're obvisouly working really hard. I especially liked the black dress in the log cabin shots, a lot of attitude, great legs, very cool.

I'm probably not a great judge of categories so I'll leave that for some of the other folks here but, if I could offer one suggestion, it would be to lose the silver-satin-star background, it's pretty distracting, expecially around your text.

Other than that I enjoyed it, keep working.

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Old 03-10-2005, 08:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Amber,
It looks like your doing some nice work. In the casual catagory- I don't think the third image on the top belongs there. Thats all the images I really looked at, because the main problem with your site is the image file sizes. Most of them are huge. Some of them are over 300k, for images the size you have in your galleries they should not be over 30 or 40k. The load times where really unreasonable and I'm on a high speed connection. The background on your site would work alot better if you set it to streach instead of tile. Keep up the good modeling work. Maybe I'll get a chance to work with you one day!
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Amber:

On your Main Page under "Your Look and Style" burgundy is misspelled.

Fashion Page: (top-bottom--left-right) Keep in mind I'm no fashion expert.
#5 would work better in the glamour catagory only because your nipples are showing through the pink outfit and takes away fro the shoes.
#15 again in galmour because it's dark and doesn't really show the garment.

That's about it.

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Old 03-10-2005, 09:01 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Victoria god I love that name.
Casual, move the gold crown to Fashion.
Editorial, They really are not Editorial type shoots unless in a art magazine.
Artistic, dead on target!
Fashion, image 12 to Casual. 15 and 16 to Editorial.
Glamour, I feel its right but when it comes to Glamour it hinges on who's definition you use may self I believe this is Glamour. Others may not!
Head Shots, You have the same photo "Gold Grown" listed hear as well as Casual still think it belongs in fashion.
Portfolio You should use one photo, The best that you feels says it all and move the remainders to subcategories. And make the whole portfolio in to lingerie.

One question is these all 2004/05 or are some earlier time frame? The New the Better, unlike some models that live or on the past glory!

This how I see it. Thanks for the opportunity to answer your question!
Vary Impressive [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Even with the slow load time.
Hope this helps you!
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I've changed most pictures thanks. About all my lingerie work that's under "portfolio" that's where I have to put them since they dont have a category for lingerie (Yes, I've asked them to put that category in) no answer yet. I also heard "Editorial" is where a picture tells a story, is that not correct? Most of the pictures on there are from 03 & 05, I started modeling in 03 so there's nothing earlier then that.
 
 
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Editorial some thing that would be seen in a newspaper or magazine Note a catalog persay so yes there is a story line there but the photo should be able to stand-alone. I just did not see that there. Remember this is my opinion and one now what a opinion is. LOL


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Hi Amber!
I just checked out your site, it's cool though I was a bit confused with the portfolio section after seeing the photos.... It looked to me that it would be more aptly called 'Lingerie.'

Anyways, thats just my opinion.
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Hi Victoria,
Nice site, obviously a lot of hard work went into it. One thing I noticed is that 'underlined text' normally indicates a link, but not on your page, it's about 50/50?
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Stopped back by your web site nice changes. As for Lingerie I see there is not category as of yet for it. Under stand the chose you had to make there and its a beautiful presentation as well. Have you ever thought about I-Model for a web site? Just wondering?

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