I see what you're getting at as far as your theme for these images. I'm not so sure I see an "internet killed the video star" kind of thing going on, though (could you maybe explain a little more what you mean by that?).
What I do see, though (and this is where bigger images posted would help, if it's possible), is a girl lured into the "dark side" of the web, so to speak (sex, porn, or something like that), and perhaps getting into more than she bargained for but not realizing it just yet. I get that sense especially with the two images as a series. In other words, I wouldn't really feel that way with just the first image.
The only quibble I have is that it's not totally obvious (to me, anyway), that the Think Pad is a Think Pad/laptop. I think seeing that that is indeed a laptop/computer is paramount to your theme. Maybe, again, if the images were bigger, it might be more obvious.
I do like the composition better in the second one. The dark area of the Think Pad in the first one feels very heavy to me in that area, IMHO, but mainly because I don't get a sense of a balancing value anywhere in the rest of the image. It's either that, or there might be a bit too much open space (the orange cloth), one of the two. In the second one, her hair dark helps to balance it out, for me.
So far, my favorite image you've posted is the "bar snapshot." [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
I hope you don't feel I'm critiquing too harshly in any way-- I'm simply stating the first things that come to mind. One of these days soon (hopefully) I'll post some images, and feel free to rip into 'em when I do. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
(I keep forgetting to post an image with a critique... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img])