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Old 03-09-2005, 12:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The subtle senuality of this shot appeals to me. Wondering what viewers of this forum think. Please offer comment or critique.

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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 01:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Jeffrey,
Marissa is a beautiful model, and you've done a great job with this image. The lighting is very subtle and appealing. I'm glad to see other photographers from our area. Keep it up.
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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 02:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Lighting looks flat to me, and her skin tone appears blueish. Anyone else she this? I would also have worked on the areas below her eyes. If you are going to pose a model like this, I recommend you hide the wrinkes in her neck with her hair, a collared shirt, etc. She is a very attractive model. Of course, these are just my opinions.



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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 07:14 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Subtle sensuality was a very good descriptor for this picture. The tint is a little rich and I might have tweaked the contrast for a slight bit more definition. But I MUST ADD that those are nitpicky criticisms. The shot is beautiful. Model is stunning. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 12:21 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Jack, Thanks for your comments and helpful critique.

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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 12:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Steve, Thanks for looking and taking the time to offer some thoughts.

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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 12:33 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Darrel,
Thanks for looking and leaving generous comments. I viewed your site... very nice.

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Re: Marissa
Old 03-09-2005, 01:24 PM   #8 (permalink)
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The model is beautiful - but her face should not be pink. It contrasts from her neck down. Who did her make-up?

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Old 03-09-2005, 05:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
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lovely model and nice pose. Looks like a curves and levels adjustment is needed.

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Old 03-09-2005, 09:32 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Jim,

What sort of adjustments would you suggest?

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