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Okies heres some of my first tries at pics.
Old 03-08-2005, 12:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Say what you need to say. I won't get pissed as long as it's the truth about how I can improve. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Scanned pics from the Canon camera. We used two florescent lights and the camera did the other stuff.We set up in Amy's basement and had a blast.
The first one I didn't like at all until I scanned it. I didn't edit pic one at all after scan. I used paintshop to sharpen the other two and left them alone for now.







And this is from the nikon. I was really not happy with the nikon closeup.



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Old 03-08-2005, 01:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i'm in an altered state, so i don't think i should say anything about your pics.

but.

i have some other stuff that comes to mind now that you're a photographer as well a model:

1) in the role of "photographer," do you also keep a bodyguard handy?

2) did your model bring a bodyguard to your shoot?

3) did you touch the model at any time?

4) if both you and your model each brought bodyguards, how did the bodyguards get along? were they, like, giving each other the stink-eye or were they coool with each other?

5) if you touched the model, did she touch you? and if so, how much touching was going on? and if a bunch of that was going on, how did the bodyguards seem to take it?
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Re: FIVE (5 ) IMPORTANT ANSWERS
Old 03-08-2005, 01:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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1)Always. Amy's a sexual being!

2)Yes Amy know's How I am when she and me are alone.

3)(Censored)This is a family site.

4)We each hired the same bodyguard. We got a group discount! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

5)Please see answer #3, and the bodyguard loved it, he ran the camera once we, well, you know. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] we girls oiled up and wrestled!

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Hmmm...now I have figured out the root of all your safety concerns with photographers.
Apparently you think it is common practice for a photographer to "oil up" and wrestle with the model. You must have been exposed to this by some photographer you worked with and since then have believed that this is how it works. I am sorry to inform you that this is NOT standard practice.

If you were a professional photographer, you would know that the photographer doesn't oil up when wrestling with his models because this would cause potential damage to his equipment. (er, camera equipment I mean)

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Re: Okies heres some of my first tries at pics.
Old 03-08-2005, 03:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Marty
I think you will improve the composition before all.

Nice the light, except for the last shoot.

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Re: Okies heres some of my first tries at pics.
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Great start Marty! I like your exposure on the first one, and they seem to get increasingly overexposed as you go down. My favorite one compositon-wise is also the first one. In the second one, I think I would've actually liked to see the top of her head in the shot. Not as in shifting the camera up, but zooming out a bit, if that makes any sense. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] In the third one, I think I would've liked the cushion of the chair pushed back up a bit (if that chair is anything like mine -- I have one just like it -- then the cushion slides down pretty easily) to where it covers the part of the wooden frame at the top. The fourth looks pretty good composition-wise. Maybe try a similar composition without the chair?

I hope I'm making sense. I'm pretty beat and I'm headed to bed soon. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

I hope you don't think I'm dumping a buncha negativity on you. I only mean it to help -- you did a great first try!

Headed to the bizzed to count some shizzeep,

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*Sam officially puts in his request to post the wrestling pics*

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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Very Funny
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Thank you hon.

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Thank you hon. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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