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Old 03-07-2005, 08:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 03-07-2005, 08:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this shot, but I think you must crop part of the top black background.

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Nice lines and interesting pose and composition. I agree with Paulo that there is maybe a bit too much space at the top that could be cropped off a little. I would maybe leave a bit more space though at the left so that if this is printed and matted, the mat doesn't crop off the foot.

A bit more light on the gown over her legs would help lift it off the background. overall the lighting on her arms seems a bit flat. It would be interesting to see what overhead lighting and no fill would do for this pose.
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Interesting idea.....
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