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Old 03-06-2005, 09:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I noticed after my I was done that I had knocked my ISO up to 400 by mistake, so they didn't turn out as well as I would have liked. I think I could have used a little more light on the face too. Let me know what you think.

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Re: New photo from today
Old 03-06-2005, 09:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Diesel,
Beautiful model. I really like the image she is lit extremely well. Skin Tones are very nice. I'm not sure how you can change the lighting, but somehow it might look better if there was more seperation of the model from the background. Additional lights behind the model? One of the veterans can tell you how or tell me if I'm way off.
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Re: New photo from today
Old 03-06-2005, 10:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments, I need to work on lighting from behind. I had a hair light but next time I will try more light from behind.
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Re: New photo from today
Old 03-06-2005, 11:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Jason,

Darrell nailed it - separation from the background adds to the image, unless you were trying to bury her into the background like I seemed to be trying to do with this one...



You've got the natural separation of her skin and the background.. but could use a bit more separation on the stockings... a backlight would add a bit of a 'rim of light' to those legs and, if you aimed the light carefully, wouldn't have overpowered the delicateness (izzat really a word?) of her skin tones.

Super image, by the way.. get that separation thing going and it's be better, still!

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Re: New photo from today
Old 03-07-2005, 12:54 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Diesel
Great model and pose. If I can nitpick, I'd point out the crease just above her right knee.
Other than that, If I can get them this good...
Keep it up!
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Old 03-07-2005, 01:35 PM   #6 (permalink)
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i think her face is lit just fine. if anything, the image could be tweaked a bit with levels/curves settings.
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Thanks for the input, I will play with the levels a little more.
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Thanks for the comments.
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Old 03-07-2005, 07:38 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thanks Wayne, I will give the back light a try. I agree with the need for the stockings to stand out more. Thanks again for the help.
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