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Old 03-06-2005, 01:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Model is my lovely (patient, kind, undertanding and loving) wife Maya.
And, uhm... please don't say anything that will make her stab me with a fork any amount of times greater than 1.
Looking for photoshop suggestions: More of this, less of that, etc.
Thanks!

This one is the edited picture:



She did her own make up.

One below, other than resize, is direct from the Camera.:
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Re: Please Critique Portrait. Glamour To Follow...
Old 03-06-2005, 02:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Your wife has pretty hair, but I don't feel as though it is necessary to show all of it on a headshot. I did some cloning, blurring and sharpening in addition to increased color saturation and recropping it. Just a quick editing on this one.



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Re: Please Critique Portrait. Glamour To Follow...
Old 03-06-2005, 08:33 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I gave it a shot, and here's what I came up with, gave it a bit of a levels tweak,increased the saturation, then I use a mediun noise to soften it. I dont like using Gausian blur to achieve the softening. then I did another technique for softening without loosing skin texture with the in the Channels Palette using the Green channel on a new layer. got rid of the yellow light spill on the left side of her teeth. and dodge a few of the highlights in her hair.

 
 
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Old 03-06-2005, 11:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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This is my revision (hope you don't mind). While I agree she has beautiful hair, it doesn't seem to work in this image. I have croppped much of it out, corrected skin with healing tool and clone tool, added slight blur and diffused glow. I sharpened the image and created a frame that I think brings out her eyes...

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Old 03-06-2005, 11:28 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi!... You have a beautiful wife. This is what I came up with.
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Since some of these guys are messin\' with your wife
Old 03-06-2005, 11:51 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hmm.. my subject line didn't come out right, but you get what i mean. Here's my attempt at messin' with it (yeah, "with it." that sounds better.)

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Re: Please Critique Portrait. Glamour To Follow...
Old 03-06-2005, 01:34 PM   #8 (permalink)
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heres my try hehe.. i liked jimmyd's croppin [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]



yea yea i forgot the line in the back.. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
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Re: Since some of these guys are messin\' with your wife
Old 03-06-2005, 05:30 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Jimmy D, by far the best adjustment. when I saw the shot it screamed B & W. Very cool dude.
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Re: Please Critique Portrait. Glamour To Follow...
Old 03-06-2005, 06:40 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Bernie.. tell your beautifgul wife Moya thanks so much for the lovely pic. She's a real stunner. The more you two continue do work and practice togather the better you both will become and even better pictures will surely follow.

Thanks

this is just another edit which I couldn't resist ....they are all very good

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