Critiques for a first real live shoot.

[Make-up by DeAnn]

This was my first opportunity to shoot in a real studio. With soft boxes and real backgrounds. This was one that was shot by my Husband that is also a newbie to the photo world. Please let us know what you think of this picture.

[MartinaSmith]

Okies I want to try just bare with me I need to learn the lingo.
The colors are pretty. I love the color behind her and her hair to.
What I don't like is how her hair gets real dark near the front and her face is darker than the background and her boobs.
How'd I do?

Marty

You did great Marty, Angels Hubby here....Im wondering if maybe it was my fault, should have changed and Fstop or two..maybe. I think its a bit dark myself. so did Angel.
Don.

[AliciaRachel]

you are off to a great start. I would practice in the mirror on your facial expressions. You have a great smile, yet it looks very forced in this pic.

I said some where to another model, that even using a full lenght mirror before the shoot in the attire you are planning to wear and practicing poses, watching angels and facial expressions can really help (also makes you feel sexy witch will show through [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]).

Look forward to seeing more
Alicia Rachel