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Old 03-03-2005, 11:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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From Saturday with Victoria Anisova. Available light, and a reflector.
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Re: Newbie First Post for Critique
Old 03-04-2005, 12:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Darrell great shot.

Just love the light, and contrast you have achieved. The model isn't exactly a handicap either.
My main concern is that this girl has a great face and this angle isn't the most flattering to her face.

Maybe angling the top of her body just slightly more to the right might have helped, this would certainnly have removed the couple of crease lines in her tummy just below the right elbow.

Great shot keep em coming

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Re: Newbie First Post for Critique
Old 03-04-2005, 12:16 AM   #3 (permalink)
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imac,
Thanks for the comments. You've noticed things that competely escaped my view.

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Re: Newbie First Post for Critique
Old 03-04-2005, 12:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Your welcome...
and please keep shooting more nudes/ glamour with available light, as it is my favorite lighting... just does beautiful things to great models like Victoria

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Magical light!
Old 03-04-2005, 02:13 AM   #5 (permalink)
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that's what you captured there... magical light. really REALLY nice!
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if you're a newbie... i don't mean a newbie to GG, but a newbie to photography, i'm Very VERY impressed.
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Re: Magical light!
Old 03-04-2005, 02:33 AM   #7 (permalink)
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jimmyd, appreciate you looking at my work. I've lurked for quite a while and have really enjoyed your noir-ish series.
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Re: Newbie First Post for Critique
Old 03-04-2005, 02:35 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Great shot (maybe because i like Vic? :-) )
anyway, on my monitor I loose detail of her second boot (near divano).

I like the light and the shadows on her face.
Be carefull with the pose to avoid the (damn I dont know the english word) "line of muscle" like on her neck.

Nice work anyway

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Old 03-04-2005, 02:43 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I'm definitely a newbie to glamour. Been doing it for less than a year, trying to rise above the GWC level. I've been doing landscapes and the usual for a while.
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Old 03-04-2005, 03:03 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Paolo,
Thanks for the comments. Any ideas on what I could have done to get more detail on the boots?
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