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Old 03-02-2005, 07:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's from a new guy Critique away. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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hi ron and welcome. you have a beautiful image of a beautiful model.

she has a rounder face so you did a great job minimizing that by the high facial angle and camera postion. i might have zoomed out a little and shown a little more hair or BG so that the whole frame isnt just filled with her face.

the other hard trick about shooting a round face is lighting. the more light you put on her whole face the more attention you draw to it, thats number 1. not knowing what lighting setup you had, i might have done something like single source light with a reflector. i want to have a stronger ratio than normal that would give me good lighting on one side of her face then the light really falling off across her face creating a slimming effect.

i like the shot. she looks like she is having fun and relaxed. keep up the good work.

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JP,

Thanks for the input, I did as you suggested, with the lighting source. The AD cropped it I guess she wanted more on the face, and yes the model was very relaxed and happy with the shot as well.

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Thank you for your critique input. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Nice composition and lighting. You had a beautiful shot there, but then you way overdid the P'shop. The skin now looks like plastic and they eyes look artificial. P'shop requires a very soft touch, go back to the original and try again? This time leave a little texture in the skin?
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Thanks I'll try that. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Doug is this what you had in mind??

If not feel free to fix it as you like. Maybe(and quite possibly am) missing something.

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