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Old 02-28-2005, 06:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Her legs seem a little off color, possibly because it was freezing. I kind of like it, was looking for some feedback on that and anything else you can add that may help. Thank you.



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well there\'s a theme we don\'t often see!
Old 02-28-2005, 08:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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and i think its got potential! dang, it looks cold up there. is that snow in the background thru the trees?

i'll resist any attempt at simian jokes.

yeah, there's definitely some problems with tonal values. but i thnk your composition and framing is pretty much right on.

the way she's looking down, she looks like she's concerned about falling. i think the image would have more impact if she were staring straight at the lens with a, "what? you've never seen a naked chic in a tree before?" look on her face.

btw, you did come up with this shot, right? you weren't taking a hike in the woods and came across a naked chic in the tree, were you? i mean, she was with you, right? if not, where is this forest? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]
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Old 02-28-2005, 10:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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First reaction: Holy Crap!

That is one of the more dramatic, unusual images I've seen here. Definitely not run of the mill. I'm with Jimmy, how did you come up with this one? What was the models reaction when you told her? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/blush.gif[/img]
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Old 02-28-2005, 10:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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There appears to be some noise (color noise maybe?) in her face.

Interesting and creative shot. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

Thanks for sharing.

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Wow! is this the x-rated version of crouching tiger hidden dragon? Jimmy your killin me!! id like to know where this forest is too!

im an amateur so im not yet experienced to critique but i think you did a good job. i dont think i would ever meet a chic that would climb a tree and pose, especially in that kind of weather.

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I am new to glamour and may not have the experience to offer a critique but I really like this shot. The angles of the models arms and legs offers such a great contrast to the verticle lines of of the trees. Nicely done.

Seeing that you are based in New York City I was wondering if this was shot in Central Park. I would have rather seen this than "The Gates" [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Re: well there\'s a theme we don\'t often see!
Old 03-01-2005, 09:00 AM   #7 (permalink)
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i'll resist any attempt at simian jokes.

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What? You've never seen a BARE in a tree before? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

I agree that this is one of the most unusual shots I've seen in a long while. Love the dark hair -- blonde wouldn't have worked. Do you have any more from this series before she turned completely blue and crashed to the ground like a Christmas ornament? --Randy
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Wow! She must be strong. I know I would have difficulty doing something like that. I think it is a great picture. The color in her legs let me know that it is really cold out there.
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Old 03-01-2005, 11:44 AM   #9 (permalink)
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My first thought was her getting a branch up her ass on the way down. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

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Ouch!
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That'd hurt! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]
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