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Okay - I\'ll submit one to a crituque...
Old 02-26-2005, 06:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Model is Akilah. A dream to work with. We were messing around with the scarf and trying new ideas. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Comments - Critiques? Thanks!

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Re: Okay - I\'ll submit one to a crituque...
Old 02-26-2005, 07:41 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Did you do much editing to the eyes? They seem a little too white, and I can too see editing on the lips that isn't to the edges or natural looking. I like the composition and exposure. A very nice looking model too.
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Old 02-26-2005, 07:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Very, very nice. I'm vieweing this on a 1995 era laptop with a very poor screen - yet it still looks REALLY good.

Thanks for sharing.
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Old 02-26-2005, 09:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Actually the eyes are not touched up at all. She had fantasitc eyes. The only thing besides cropping that I did to the photo was add a little unsharp mask. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Old 02-26-2005, 10:16 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I enlarged the photo to take a closer look at what I was talking about and there are alot of color artifacts, maybe it was caused from too much unsharp mask.
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Old 02-27-2005, 01:12 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice job, I like your use of negative space in this image.
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Great job!!

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Old 02-27-2005, 09:27 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Left Breast center along edge and down,a lager amount of noise.
Nice work over all! Lovely model!
Thank You for sharing!

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