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Old 02-23-2005, 08:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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okay Im fairly thick skinned..so do your worst, or best however you look at it.
 
 
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First thing that caught my eye was that her face and hands have a different skin tone then the rest of her. The other things that bother me are the cropping of her foot, the expression doesnt work for me and the pose isnt too flattering for the model. I would also try to move her away from the background and try to get the wrinkles out of it. keep on reading here and learning from those that are much better then I am and you will do fine. thanks for posting and definately make it a habit.

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Old 02-23-2005, 09:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Scott. now that you mention it...I do notice the hands.. Lighting issue perhaps? if you dont mind explaining further about the pose not being flattering I would appreciate your tips.
 
 
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Is the background supposed to be pink? It needs to be lighted more strongly. Also her pose is not flattering to her body type. She shouldn't be posed where her tummmy and rib cage are able to hang down. She is atractive, play to her type of body. Get her on her bottom, and let her stretch out. Also, the look on her face...who is she mad at? Keep shooting!



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