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Old 02-18-2005, 12:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello, I'm new to this forum, and joined mostly for the critique section. Please let me know what you think. This was shot with 2 Novatron heads through umbrellas. Please see past the "specks" as im not the most computer savvy and still learning how to use a scanner. By the way, the "model" is my lovely wife. Thanks in advance for your coments.
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Old 02-18-2005, 10:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Dean,
If the shot has to have the "ropes?" at the top of the shot showing then I would find something for your model to stand on so you could tighten the image. If not then crop them out and concentrate on you model. If the image were larger we might be able to comment on shadows/catch-light, etc. Hope this helps..
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Old 02-18-2005, 04:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think it sucks that you get to be in Colorado and I don't. Oh, you meant about the picture. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] As was already stated, too much space above her. For me, she is turned too much to the side. Just my opinion.

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Old 02-19-2005, 01:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Well, i learn something new each day. I see what you mean with the (ropes) i tried to make my own "frame" doing that. Would it have been better if i'd broght them in closer to more or less frame her, or bring her away more from the background so it appeared tighter? Thanks for the comments folks, appreciate it alot. Dean
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Old 02-20-2005, 01:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Personally I love this image. It has a mysterious sultry look to it.

The lines are great from my perspective. The only change I would have made for my taste is to have added a hair light to her right side for a bit more separation from the background.
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