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Old 02-16-2005, 01:03 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Just shot this afternoon.
I thought it came out great...
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I agree.. nice job...
1. clone out some of her stray hairs
2. clone out some of the lines under her arm...

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I like it. Only change I woud make is move her right elbow back slightly, to open it up a little.

I like the hair, but then I'm a wild hair guy LOL.
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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] HI Extreme, gorgeous model and excellant photograph you have there.

A few things stand out to me, but you may find you disagree and that's ok too.
Because this is only my opinion, not law, hehe
ok,First thing, to me, is her rib cage. The way the light hits her it highlights her rib cage on her side and her front. Some people might find this attractive, so it may be a matter of taste.
2nd, Her elbow closest to camera, it may be uncomfortable but I would try to have her point it a little more away from the camera, not at it.
3RD, have her pick up her chin, try to get rid of a few wrinkles and show off her neck.

Now if you can, I would suggest same set, lighting setup, camera angle and height, and same model and outfit, and just tweak a few things here and there, see which you like best.
In other words experiment with it.

And have fun, You're showing some superb talent and photographs,
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