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Sometimes I think I just might be getting the hang of this!
Old 02-16-2005, 12:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The model is Perri. She used to do modeling for (non-photography) art classes, I was the first photographer she ever really worked with. She got the hang of it pretty quickly. Now, ir I could just keep the #$&%! wrinkles out of my backdrops! I gotta try this seemless paper stuff. Ok, fire away!
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Re: Sometimes I think I just might be getting the hang of this!
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1. Move her away from the backdrop if you can / get some paper.... you know that....
2. get more light on her hair
3. turn down your fan just a little


Great model, great job...... post some more....

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Re: Sometimes I think I just might be getting the hang of this!
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Ok, I have no credentials, no background, but I want to give this a try.

1. Agree on paper, or different background
2. Get model to put a little twist in the hip, give you more of an s-curve to her body
3. Watch the facial expression, appears to me that she is or has been crying, and open her mouth slightly. Clamped closed narrows the lips.
4. I would either like to see model further from background or background better lit to give more seperation.

I know this sounds like alot, but overall most of the elements that I like in a photo are here. Keep at it.

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Well, here\'s some more.
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Re: Well, here\'s some more.
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Your pics are kinda flat. Did you do a Levels adjustment on them?

And it appears she wore no makeup at all. That makes it harder.

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Did what I could about the expression hopefully without going too far.

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