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Old 02-15-2005, 02:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So my calendar shoot for my friend's friends went south when they saw some of my ideas of glamour. Guess it means different things to different people. I was willing to work around their fears, but alas the six models disappeared.

The good news is that my best friend's wife, who was the instigator of the calendar idea, was still willing. This is my favorite image from the shoot, and really that I've ever shot. I know it isn't perfect, so go ahead tell me what you like and don't like about it.



The sun came out for the first time in a week - which is a long time for Houston - so we were able to shoot all natural light.
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Old 02-15-2005, 04:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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.... brain dead, so currently no thoughts other then

Fire bad, school girl outfit pretty



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Old 02-15-2005, 04:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well, honestly speaking, although she looks like a really hot looking teacher, I just don't see "school girl". But, a great looking teacher!
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Too bad about the other ladies, it would have been a fun project,...but you can still do it with this very attractive lady, just different scenarios.
She looks like she'd be fun to shoot with.
I copied the pic to photoshop and did a levels, contrast,and brightness adjustment to lighten the back of her legs, then rotated the pic ccw 1.5 degrees, to plumb the bookcase, and then sharpened 70%. I could e-mail it if you'd like.
Keep shooting, like to see more. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Old 02-15-2005, 05:15 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Please do send it.

I actually adjusted the levels, using a grey card in another image with the same light. But I also added a vignette to this image which darkened it around the sides. Maybe that was too much.

I didn't notice the camera tilt until today. I'd like to see what effect fixing it in PS has. I'll PM you an email address.
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:25 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Im not sure if I can post here not being a photographer but I will put in my 2 cents.
if my opinion is allowed here- the star on the desk looks significant. Is it? If not, is there something that can be done about it?
Like I said, Im just a chick, but the star caught my attention- and held it.

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Re: School Girl
Old 02-15-2005, 05:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Nothing significant, just a bit of Texas architecture. Thanks for the feedback.
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:30 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Jason, for some reason that picture really reminds me of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, or maybe the was I want her to be. Great image.
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:35 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I sent it, someone with more expertise in PS would I'm sure do better than I,..
but on my failing monitor it looks ok.
But to critique, which is what you wanted to begin with, I would say you needed a reflector behind her to fill the shadows.
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:38 PM   #10 (permalink)
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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Had one of those too. Guess I needed better reflecting. Now my assistant is in trouble.
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