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Old 02-13-2005, 05:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A few firsts for me. First time posting, first attempt at glamour, and first digital shoot. Looking forward to comments on how I did, and how I can do better.

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Old 02-13-2005, 05:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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My opinion....

You did good.. but you forgot to send model to me here in Arizona..

I like them.. needless to say..


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Re: First Times
Old 02-14-2005, 09:04 AM   #3 (permalink)
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O.k. here it goes.

#1 She's leaning too much on her left hand. It's sad that when you lean on your hand, you don't really lean on your hand. Putting weight on it like that isn't flattering. It would have looked a lot better if you had her move her hand more around the ear and softly set in her hair. The right hand just dissappears into nowhere. Either open the frame more or have her move her hand up to her right teddy strap and then make sure the elbow doesn't dissappear.

#2 Better. I like the face. Maybe a closer crop would work better. Those fingers come out of nowhere and with the white finger nail polish, I find it a little distracting.

#3 You're getting there! That left arm looks way to fat near the shoulder/armpit. That's because she's leaning on it too much. Have her get some of the weight off that arm and that will go away.

Overall nice stuff. Keep shooting. Look at your images and then find the flaws or things you don't like and then next time don't repeat them. You'll find a lot of great photogs here for you to learn from.

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Thanks for the comments and ideas Mike. I didn't notice her leaning so much on her arm until I got back home and started looking at the pictures. One more thing to add to the mental checklist before clicking the shutter.
 
 
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See that's what seperates a GWC and those who truly appreciate the artform and the beauty of the female form. Keep working on it. You'll get better [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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