Mississippi Lady

[Photonut]

Please critique. Thanks

[jimmyd]

pretty girl. her face, IMO, needs to turn left just a bit, squaring off to the camera. maybe tilted down a bit as well. i think that would have gotten rid of that distracting line between her jaw/cheek-line and her neck. mainlight could have come from a bit more to the left to pronounce the shadow on the right side of her face a bit more. makeup is uneven: too heavy on the eyebrows, not enough blush, lips could be better defined and brighter. her expression looks kind of bored. i doubt that she was and i certainly don't think that's what she/you intended to convey, but it strikes me that way.