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Old 01-31-2005, 05:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first post. This model had seen some shots I had done of another models tatoo and liked them so I thought I would try to intergrate her tatoos into some of her shots. I am still learning so I would like your thoughts on what does and doesn't work.







for the first shot I used 2 AB1600 lights with umbrellas. The second shot was shot with 1 AB1600 bare bulb. The third shot was shot with 1 AB1600 with an umbrella. The camera was set to 1/125 at f16 for all 3 shots.
 
 
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I really like the first shot. I would have left the necklace off of her though -it's a bit distracting and appears to be too fancy for a shot of her in blue jeans. I love the curviness of her body and the focus on her tattoo. I would have loved to see her hair, provided it is long, kind of flowing down over the right side of her body, to sort of frame out the tattoo. I don't like the model's right hand up by her face. It may have been better positioned tucked up underneath her. Interesting perspective. It seems there was some ?blurring? or softness happening around her left shoulderblade. It gives the skin a different appearance than the rest of her skin, and sort of blends with the background there.

The second and third appear to belong in a tattoo shop as examples of what they can do, with the exception of the white netting over the third. I think the first has real potential though. At least I liked it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Take care, and post often!

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I like the first image as well. I think it should be Rotated 90 degrees CW so she's crawling away from you and warmed up a touch.

Thanks for sharing....

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