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Another of Melissa
Old 01-28-2005, 12:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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OK, here's the official "give me a critique!" image of Melissa...



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Re: Another of Melissa
Old 01-28-2005, 12:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think this is a lovely portrait.

I would suggest more seperation between subject and background.


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Hi Wayne,

I am not a fan of hands over stomach, for looking like a belly ache or upset stomach.

She's kind of a ghost with black on black. I think there has to be some seperation between her dress and the background.

I would like to have seen her right shoulder lean in to the camera just a little more.

Eyes stand out. Cute girl.



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Re: Another of Melissa
Old 01-28-2005, 09:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Did I miss this outfit, your have you had a session with Melissa since Sunday?
I like the shot. I think it has a nice soft look to it. I agree with the others about background seperaton as on my monitor it looks like the dress and the background are totally one. No seperation at all. Its like the black art principle in magic where black on black means you only see the objects that are not black. It looks like you did some work on her face also for blemishes (either that or good make-up).

Here's is another one I took of her Sunday. This would be among the first 10 shots I made of her:

It uses the NIK Classical soft filter.

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Re: Another of Melissa
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Nice shot, althought I agree with all the previous comments. On my monitor, she melts into the background so some separation would great. Also, the hand position combined with lack of separation makes me think she's fat (which we know from your previous posts she is definitely NOT). Keep up the great work!
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Re: Another of Melissa
Old 01-28-2005, 03:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Good job Wayne.... I don't mind the black on black but I agree with JT on the arm..

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Did I miss this outfit, or have you had a session with Melissa since Sunday?

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Yeah, you must have missed this outfit... it was the first one she wore.

Actually, I think I achieved what I was wanting to achieve with her image... I thought that the black-on-black would emphasize her tan and her face/hair... I guess, though, that it doesn't appeal to other folks as much as it appeals to me.

Yep, a little bit of healing brush on her face....

I guess I'm going to have to figure out what to do with the arm, though..

To JT, Jonathan, and all.... thanks for the comments! Guess I'll have to get with Melissa again and try it with a backlight! Gosh... a photographer's work is never done! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/blush.gif[/img]
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