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Old 01-23-2005, 07:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Last weeks model was Mariana from West Palm Beach. Hope its not overkill,but I wanted to show a few different looks. Hope to hear from you [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]





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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-23-2005, 09:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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There is only one thing wrong that I can see. you cut her toes off in the last shot. I can only imagine her toes are as perfect as the rest of her.

I give you and * A * Nice work !!

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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-23-2005, 09:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The 1st and 3rd shots are my faves. All are very nice though!

Just curious, what type of lighting did you use on the 1st one?

Regards and good work, Brett
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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-23-2005, 09:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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That is funny that you ask about the lighting on the first one because it is just sunlight with no modifier at all. Very cheap, abundant, and easy to use at the right times of day. If you are "outdoor handicapped" like I am..I truly suck ,it is very tasking for me to even get the right angle with a reflector, and then it takes me an hour to fold the sucker back up! I still don't get how you figure out the f stops using a speedlight ....so until I get it, I have no choice but to got outside one hour after or before sunrise/sunset.
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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 12:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Damn, girl... you're getting good at this!

Ain't none of 'em bad... 2,3, and 4 are my fave's, but they'll all top notch.

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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 12:33 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Love them all but that 3rd one, very cool!
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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 02:02 AM   #7 (permalink)
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#s 2 and 4 ring my bell--though #4 has a lil crop problem top and bottom. #2's my fave-- lighting gives apperance of someone opening an off-camera door and busting her getting all posey and sexy... i love it when the images "speak."
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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 08:25 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Really nice stuff. As mentioned, some minor cropping issues on #2 and #4. IMO, the shadow on #5 detracts from the overall classic pin-up character. I especially like the third.

Thanks for sharing.
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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 01:23 PM   #9 (permalink)
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#1 - Nice. I like the eyes and the pucker.
#2 - My favorite. Man she has to have no fat to be able to twist like that and not get a roll under her left arm.
#3 - Don't like the crop. Like the concept, but not the crop. I would have lied to see her whole body.
#4 - Better, better. I'd like to have seen her right arm open up a little more. The vantage that you shot it at kinda makes it look like her forearm is dissapearing into her upper arm. The crop at the toes is just distracting.
#5 - It's all mice except for that shadow behind her. The hands covering the boobs thing is a little overdone for me. You can still shoot her topless without showing her nipples and not make it look like that was intended.

Overall, it's a nice set. She's gorgeous and you've done some nice work.

Mike

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Re: New Pix for Critique
Old 01-24-2005, 01:40 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Hi Wayne!
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