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Old 01-19-2005, 09:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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from an October shoot. Still trying to decide whether to go Monochrome in this photoset or not. Opinions? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
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Old 01-19-2005, 10:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the color, otherwise you would not be able to tell that her tattoo is a chili pepper. Thats my choice anyway.
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Old 01-19-2005, 10:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Have you considered all B&W except for the pepper.
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Re: Alectra
Old 01-20-2005, 07:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I would go BnW. (I am biased though, right now i have rediscovered my love of BnW and am addicted one again hehe)

NOW DONT TAKE THIS WRONG MY FRIEND [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

But,As for that photo, I would suggest, not using it. If you look at it, her left butt cheek looks about the same size as her whole stomach and upper body put together. It's very unflattering to the model. The position and angle you shot from, gives the illusion of that. Secondly her tummy. I bet she actually has a flat tummy. But the angle to you, it makes her tummy look likes it juts out and she is overweight. (I have done the same thing so don't feel badly. But do remember if the model looks bad, the photographer look bad)

Now some photographs can look so very awesome using that same distortion that shows in that photo. Like say you had just stepped to your left a few steps, and at the same height taken a photo that distorted the length of her legs, or something like that. That might have been neat to see. (but keep experimenting, with diff angles, poses, lighting, props, hairstyles and more) You're improving with each shoot :-) Don't stop.

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Old 01-20-2005, 07:55 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Not taken wrong. I appreciate very much your honest and positively critical feedback. I see your point, though I created the angle of the model's body with cropping (look at the angle of the stoolhead) and liked the final crop, you are right, her torso looks a bit distorted. Thanks again, for your thoughts. More work!
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Old 01-20-2005, 08:32 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Yea... I have to admit it, I agree with Hollywood. There is something not working in this shot. Combination of harsh lighting, booty forward, angle.... I can't quite put my finger on it, but, I'd re-shoot or pick another image if you have it. Sorry, no offence, but I've seen better stuff from you.

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