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Old 01-16-2005, 02:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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First post to the critique forum. This was my first shoot in studio where I was running everything and I still have a lot of room for improvement. This is straight out of the camera - no adjustments but resizing. I am mainly looking for a lighting critique. Here's the setup - medium softbox 45 deg from model 10' away, 10' high, large white foamcore in front of me angled up at her face (creates catchlight in larger image and softens shadow under hat) and large white foamcore behind her as fill.

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Hi Herb,

Nice shot and good looking model. Regarding the lighting, one "problem" is that you broad-lit her. Short lighting almost always is better. And I work with my main light very close to the subject, even using a large SB. This is even more important with a medium that you used. I'd suggest putting it as close as you can get it while keeping it out of the frame.

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