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Thuy Pham
Old 01-15-2005, 03:25 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 01-15-2005, 06:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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#1's nice. You should try to have her not lean so hard on her left arm. When she does that, it makes her upper arm look fat, especially at the shoulder.

#2 overexposed. Lots of detail lost in the face.

#3 o.k. doesn't really do anything for me.

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First off, your choice of model, excellent.

Picture #1: I like. Her leaning toward the camera slightly gives us a nice side view of her. (Rule #923 of the guy's guide to photographs: "CLEAVAGE IS GOOD!" ) I like the photo. But please do watch for the clothing wrinkles, and try to keep that at a minimum.

Picture #2: This is a nice portrait. Overexposed somewhat ( maybe a little to much on the brightness and contrast in editing). But not to far gone where you cannot see details of her face's shape and contours.Theone thing you want to watch for though is, look at her lips, see how they blend right into her cheek color? Go jusssst a little less on brightness so you will be able to see her lips next time, and you have a winner. Hand positioning excellent. Maybe next time try one with the scarf in her hands, and one without the scarf. Same hand positions, just with and without scarf.

Picture 3: I like this one as well. I have not seen the full photo of this. I would guess maybe if you cropped a little less of the head, and cropped a little closer into her shoulders, you'd get a different look you might like more. But either way.

An overall nicely done glamour photoset here. Keep working at it. Your doing a great job.


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Old 01-17-2005, 01:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for your review guys.... Good things to keep in mind....
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