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New Kid on the Block
Old 01-10-2005, 08:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm a Tampa area photographer who has been doing TFP and some commercial work in this area for over 4 yrs. Just joined the GG group and thought I'd post a recent pic for some reviews and to introduce myself. Any local photogs that want to hook up, exchange notes, ideas, collaborate on shoots etc. give me a shout. My site is Tim's Photo Site

Here's the image of Jayme submitted for your comments....


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Re: New Kid on the Block
Old 01-11-2005, 08:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to GG. Nice to have you here.

As for your shot. Maybe it is just my monitor here at work but the color seems a little off to me. The face also looks like you added some blur to it that gives it a kind of weird look to my tired eyes. Any way, welcome and hope to see you posting often.

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Re: New Kid on the Block
Old 01-11-2005, 09:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Welcome

I want to crank my head to view it

The arm takes me right on bye

Her strength is her eyes and you put them right in the middle and the viewer's eye is going to wander...

Her shoulder/neck/necklace area is distracting and uncomfortable.

Beautiful girl with beautiful eyes as I mentioned. You need a brighter modeling light to reduce those pupils. She has unique color but lost in the large black pupils.

Too much blur effect and is very unnatural. Especially on the forehead area.



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Re: New Kid on the Block
Old 01-12-2005, 12:47 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Welcome, Tim. I was looking around your Web site and it crashed my browser (Firefox/Mac) twice. The first time was shortly after a page loaded, and the second time was while scrolling a different page. I don't know what's going on... maybe some bad tags? Is anybody else having problems with Tim's site? Or is it just me? --Randy
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Old 01-12-2005, 01:12 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Welcome, I checked out your site and it worked fine on my puter, PC IE 5.5
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nice site. keep posting. i agree with jt about having to crank my head. also, that bit of clothing on her shoulder is distracting (not color coordinated to the rest of the pic), but that's me being a fashion critic.

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