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Foto_Highway 01-03-2005 11:10 PM

Second chance shoot
 
Some of you may remember my previous post. I redid this shot of model Mellisa Kay and changed the lighting. As usual feedback appreciated. Thanks!

http://www.fotohighway.com/images/MellisaK20.jpg

http://www.fotohighway.com/images/MellisaK79.jpg

http://www.fotohighway.com/images/MellisaK59.jpg


jtsmith 01-04-2005 09:09 AM

Re: Second chance shoot
 
1. Model looks bored. Stiff pose. No life. Looks like you have light fall off on her face vs her chest area.

2. I like this one. I don't care for her chin being down and some distracting wrap around shadows on her right side of her face but that is just me.

3. Rim Light on shoulder is where it gets confusing. It's the brightest part of the photo and your eye leads right there and doesn't allow me to view it comfortably. Probably the best expression of your model in the series. I do wonder about the choice of colors. Leopord, pink and red?

http://www.supershoots.com/kelly/kellyg.jpg


Foto_Highway 01-04-2005 09:29 AM

Re: Second chance shoot
 
Yea. I figured the rim light thing on #3. I liked the picture in general but didnt like how the rim came out. I figured I'd get some opinions on that. Photography is so hard.

Thanks for the criticism. Keep it comin.


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