Lens Diaries Go Now
Glamour, Beauty, Nude, Models, Photographers

*    |  Register  


 
Go Back   Garage Glamour™ > Garage Glamour™ Community Related Forumss > Photo Reviews & Critiques Only
 

Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Another from Sunday with Staysi
Old 12-20-2004, 10:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
Lifetime Photographer

 
aknudsen's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Member GG#: 38861
Location: Brooklyn
Posts: 167
Comments: 0
Send a message via AIM to aknudsen Send a message via MSN to aknudsen Send a message via Skype™ to aknudsen

aknudsen is offline IP: 68.185.225.189
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

I would like to get some comments on this.


  View Public Profile Send a private message to aknudsen Visit aknudsen's homepage! Find More Posts by aknudsen
 
It\'s like this...
Old 12-20-2004, 11:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
____________
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Member GG#: 35406
Location: Bogus
Posts: 947
Comments: 0

Al_Nowak is offline IP: 68.255.76.194
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

She is a beautiful young lady, but her body language and expression make it look like she would have preferred to be somewhere else.

Then there is that ring (third finger left hand) that would appear to say "I'm spoken for".

Just my opinion. Worth about what it cost you...








  View Public Profile Send a private message to Al_Nowak Find More Posts by Al_Nowak
 
Re: Another from Sunday with Staysi
Old 12-21-2004, 12:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
Lifetime Photographer
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Member GG#: 38485
Location: Tyler
Posts: 302
Comments: 0

photoTexas is offline IP: 63.188.200.172
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Don't care for the pose and its at to steep of an angle..
  View Public Profile Send a private message to photoTexas Find More Posts by photoTexas
 
Re: Another from Sunday with Staysi
Old 12-21-2004, 10:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
**DONOTDELETE**
Guest
 
Member GG#:
Posts: n/a
Comments:

IP: 65.96.216.100
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Hi AK,

As the photographer, try not tocut off the subjects head.Maybe more lighting from the subjects right would help illuminate this shot better.

As the model/subject
The subjects pose, should be her standing up straight, head held high so as to show she has a neck, her legs need to switch places( IE: her right leg back and her left leg forward) Her expression could be a little more to the extreme , either totally annoyed with a snarl or a happy smile. Have her extend her left hands fingers so they are almost straight.

And finally as the photo editor, always spell check your spelling when adding your name to the photo.

John
 
 
Re: Another from Sunday with Staysi
Old 12-21-2004, 03:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
Free Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Member GG#: 36227
Location: Tucson
Posts: 37
Comments: 0

Pro_Phase_Photo is offline IP: 24.255.49.50
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

I usually don't comment on photos for critique, but thought I'd make an exception here. It's one of those pictures that someone would see it and say "nice", it just needs tweaking here and there.
1. Don't like the background, unless it is part of a series.
2. I saw the same "needs more light on the right".
3. The lighting gives her a little sign of a belly above the waistband or she's in the first stages of pregnancy. If she does have a little belly, she needed to suck it in.
3. Same cut off head.
4. Same put her head up higher, it seems she is stooping over to fit in the picture.
5. Don't like the tilting of the photo for some reason.
6. Be nice about the boy's spelling, I do declare he's from Louisiana.
Please take these as constructive criticism, except the last line about spelling I was just teasing. It is a nice photo, but needs some fine tuning.
  View Public Profile Send a private message to Pro_Phase_Photo Visit Pro_Phase_Photo's homepage! Find More Posts by Pro_Phase_Photo
 
Re: It\'s like this...
Old 01-06-2005, 08:13 PM   #6 (permalink)
Free Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Member GG#: 40494
Location: easton
Posts: 7
Comments: 0

Xtreme_Xposure is offline IP: 162.84.18.16
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Ring bothered me too LOL
Hard group here
  View Public Profile Send a private message to Xtreme_Xposure Find More Posts by Xtreme_Xposure
 
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Sunday at Ralph's (New model Lauren) Titan Main Community Forum 7 01-28-2006 04:51 PM
Happy Sunday !!! Margo Main Community Forum 4 10-09-2005 08:47 PM
Jessica from Sunday improv shoot MrPhotoStudios Main Community Forum 4 10-06-2005 07:57 AM
Beautiful Sunday Day :) Margo Main Community Forum 2 09-18-2005 02:57 PM
New From Sunday Scott_Young Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 5 03-10-2005 12:14 PM


New To Site? Need Help? Photographer & Model Links
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 06:19 AM.

© 1999-2017 Garage Glamour™




Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93